Thursday 22 January 2015

Final 25 Word Pitch


11 comments:

  1. I believe the target market is 21 - 39 year olds.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: The Cure, The Twang
    To improve, have you considered a purposely made theme or colour scheme

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  2. I believe that the target market is 21-39 year olds and I think this is a good market to target at because there isn't really any magazines aimed at the audience at the minute.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; The Twang, The cure
    To improve have you considered talking about the colour scheme that you are going to use in your magazine.

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  3. I believe that the target market is 21-39 year olds.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as The Cure and The Twang.
    To improve have you considered using more specific information about your audience.

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  4. I believe that the target market is 21 - 29 year old male and female young alts and indie scenesters.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists Foster The People, Dog Is Dead and The Black Keys
    To improve, have you considered using a colour scheme.

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  5. I think your target audience is 21-39 indie scensters and young alts.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: The twang, The cure
    To improve have you considered a colour scheme for your magazine
    I like the name Hive as it makes the magazine sound exciting

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  6. I think your target audience is 21-29 year old indie scenesters and young alts.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists, the twang, the cure.
    I think you could improve by stating the general theme of the magazine.

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  7. I believe your target audience is 21-39, Indie scenesters and young alts
    I anticipate bands such as: The twang, the cure, the clash and catfish and the bottlemen. Very good pitch, relates to me with the young alt side of it, doesn't relate me with the age group, due to me being to young, The magazines that it relates to relate to me due to the style of both these magazines and them relating to the indie/alternative genre. Good pricing, with it being monthly I expect it to be thick and have in depth detail, also the price relates to your target audience due to it being fairly pricey it reflects the age and maturity because they will be able to spend more due to them having a job, a good balance in selected artists that relate to your magazine, having 'The Twang' who are a smaller band relates the indie side of your magazine and having the cure will relate to the alternative side of it. Also your genre of people who will relate to the magazine is very spot on due to the music that you include.

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  8. I believe your target audience is 21-39, indie scenestars and young alts
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; The Twang and The Cure
    To improve, have you considered stating your colour theme

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  9. I believe the target market is 21 - 39 year olds.

    I anticipate seeing the following artists: The Cure, The Twang and similar artists.

    To improve, I think you could possibly include the use of a colour scheme that'll suit your magazine, and possibly use a different or smaller age range that doesn't have a 18 year age gap in between them.

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  10. I believe that the target market is 21-39 year old indie scensters and young alts, who like indie/alternative music. From the use of an image of a female when describing your target audience, I can gather that you are targeting both males and females. To improve, you could perhaps consider what you are going to include in your magazine to appeal to both genders and keep them engaged with it. Also your age range is rather wide, and I think you could consider what kind of language and features you are going to include in order to keep this target audience interested.

    I expect to see artists such as The Twang and The Cure.

    I think that the price of the magazine works well as people in the age range your targeting tend to have jobs, and will probably be able to afford £4.99 monthly for a magazine.

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  11. I believe the target market is 21- 39 year old indie scenesters/Young Alts, who listen to indie/alternative music. I anticipate seeing the following artists: The Cure, The Twang and 'similar artists'
    To improve, I would consider what you are including to appeal to both sexes and change the age range as there is an 18-year gap between the two which would make it hard to appeal to all ages between 21-39.

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